do you think of me? (A POEM)

i think of you when
the clouds cry drops
of tears like my own,
each one a reminder
that you left, that you’re gone.

i think of you when
the sun bleeds me dry,
the rays a cosmic force
bent on burning my
cells to iron smithereens.

i think of you when
the wind picks up speed
and each gale weathers
my wet, burnt skin
with your memory.

i think of you often,
every thought like a
teardrop from the sky.
do you think of me,
or have i passed you by?


EXPLANATION?

With most poems I prefer to write some explanatory notes on why I chose my subject matter and whatnot. With this poem, I think I’d like to keep the backstory personal, and let you take away what you’d like from it.

I’ll leave it at that for today.

Until next time,

-A cryptic K.

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Flowers at a summer concert (Collierville, TN // June 2019)

 

26 Comments

  1. Love the ending with the question. “do you think of me, or have i passed you by?”. Wonderful read. Though, has a feeling of heaviness about it.

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    1. c17princess says:

      Thank you!!! πŸ’œπŸ’•πŸŒΈπŸŒΊπŸŒΊ

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  2. ivor20 says:

    With a tear in my eye, I’m thinking of you…..

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    1. c17princess says:

      πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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  3. You convey a sombre subject with such rich use of nature imageries.

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    1. c17princess says:

      Thank you so much, Ayansola! Your kindness means a lot to me. πŸ’•πŸŒΈπŸŒΊ

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  4. I also love he ending with question? Really enjoyable post. I hope you too soon check my latest blog posts.

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  5. I can’t say that I think of you, but I do think you should write more poems and enjoy your ability to explore and express yourself πŸ™‚

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    1. c17princess says:

      Thank you, David! Writing is such a beautiful way to express oneself.πŸŒΈπŸ’•πŸŒΊπŸ’œπŸŒΊ

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  6. Really loved this, Katie!! Beautifully penned romantic and wistfully pensive love poem. Your end – “do you think of me,
    or have i passed you by?” Was great!!! Bellissimo, My Dear, Bellisimo!! We are hoping that you will fill us in on the backstory in time or in a Sequel???? Hope you are having a great weekend!!
    xoxo

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    1. c17princess says:

      Thank you so much!!! It really means a lot. And yes… I will provide a sequel with explanation shortly!!!! It is fun leaving a little to the imagination, but I will be writing out my feelings soon! :)))))

      Enjoy this weekend too!!

      πŸŒΊπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸŒΈ

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      1. Great! Now I have something great to look forward to reading!!! Have a great weekend, My Dear!
        xoxo

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  7. Girija Jandu says:

    Lovely

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    1. c17princess says:

      Thank you so much!! πŸ’•πŸŒΈπŸ’œ

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  8. Imani-Amour says:

    Aww. This really resonates with me right now. It’s just like I wrote in my letter to myself yesterday. “Sometimes you put your heart into someone and they…forget you even exist.” It’s okay, though. You’re still loved by the people who really matter. Stay positive, my dear.

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    1. c17princess says:

      Thank you so much for reading! And you are absolutely right… Beautiful line from your letter. It can be hard to accept sometimes, but we can never forget those we love/who love us in return. πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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  9. Jyoti says:

    Wonderful write πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ‘

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  10. Pink At Heart says:

    Niceeeee! πŸ‘πŸŒΈ

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    1. c17princess says:

      Thank you!!! πŸŒΈπŸŒΈπŸ’•πŸ’œ

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  11. The Pensieve says:

    Wonderfully written, Katie! ☺️ The concluding line was the best part… It suddenly made the poetry even more profound.

    Happy blogging! ✌️

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    1. c17princess says:

      Thank you so much for enjoying this!! ❀ ❀ ❀ It means a lot.

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  12. oldpoet56 says:

    Very good poem, I am going to reblog this one for you.

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    1. c17princess says:

      Thank you!!! ❀

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